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Great beginning - can't wait for more!
This story is off to a great start! Please update soon!
Wow
Great beginning! Interesting way of wooing a woman. Trying to put her in the hospital.
Boyd
OMG!
i totally ! loved it !!! CONT pls !
Aw, Fuck.
I love it!
A catchy start to what seems like a great story!
=D
!!!!
You better write chapter 2 soon. What an amazing story so far.
yes!
i absolutely loved the beginning of this story. i really could imagine those characters in their situations! please, you have to write more to this.
P.S. i loved the way you ended the chapter the same way you started it... :D
awsome!
Awesome story! I cant wait for the next chapter! Thanks!
Fiesty pair!
Mix two strong fiesty people, add heat, watch fireworks! A recipe for a great story. Have fun with it, I sure will.
DO NOT READ FURTHER CHAPTERS!!!! UNFINISHED!!!
This story remains unfinished, as of 2007.
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