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Maggie...
and her first time with Louise was truly magnificent!
WOW
Reading this gave me a pretty good pictute of what a female's response is to another female. Way to go girls!
Short but sweet and oh so erotic. Certainly there will be a follow on
Great first story!
What a wonderfully touching story. Would love to hear what happens to the lovers next!
Great.
Really well written. You had me hooked in the first paragraph as I suppose was the intent, but I was disappointed that there wasn't more backstory. Is Maggie some sort of sadistic Domme? Is Maggie some sort of heroic figure who saved Lousie from the grassy landscape of backyard hell? I'm dying to know! Great read! I sincerely hope more follows.
Very well done
It's really hard to write a good story that is this short, but you pulled it off. You've left yourself with more to write both before and after, and I hope you do both. I'd especially like to know what the six months of chains about her neck are about. Please don't keep us in suspence.
Sounds like heaven
Such a soft sensual loving connection
thx for a sweet sexy read .
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Why was Louise chained up in her backyard? Please answer back!
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