Stripped in Public!

Great Hot Story

Very hot story of how cruel girls can be with each other. Did this happen to you? Have seen it from JHS to uni.

Who's out of control now?

Awesome job the way two storylines wove together and filled in the background. The behavior of the two girls at the mall, and the enjoyment of the tortured one in the woods/road, is a bit unbelievable, but that is the purpose of fiction, isn't it!

There does seem to be a little room for a sequel. Where's that Back button?...

good story

Good story, love the idea of public humiliation and forced nudity.

loved your story, you kept it very erotic and look forward to more from you. maybe even a second chapter where the two visit erin again and exploit her sexuallity

i'm impressed

You took a mildly teasing exhibitionist beauty to a NIP addict in one step using characters whose drive is dominating humiliation via public stripping and leaving their victim naked! great! I hope you get your fantasy in more than words.

Beautiful!

Very good! with a surprising twist.

Love the old ladies' comments, I can definitely picture that.

Awesome

"Considering how some women dress, it probably only looked that way..."

I love that quip. Excellent hot story.

Nice story, thanks

Arousing, I loved the idea of their ripping her clothes off, the Mall scene was good too.

Im too old for this

The fact I was thinking about how Bernice and Dora had become as bad as their bullies probably means im getting a tad old for this

Exciting story. I really like nakedness in public places in literature and in life.

Great start

I think she should be back with the 2 girls and they keep taking her to more places nude!