All Comments on 'A Spanking'

i mentioned this submission in the New Poem Review thread in the Poetry Forum. please feel free to come along and join in with other poets. the 50% temperature rating is given so that it does not alter future temperature ratings. - wildsweetone

I like your brief poetic description of a spanking. It is rather erotic. I wonder if you've considered some of your word choices, like fiery hot and heated fury. Maybe the poem could be even more exciting with some fresher phrases.