All Comments on 'Halloween Ch. 02'

by Khira

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
You tell a masterful story, Khira!

I very nearly came as I read this one, dear! WOW. You really do have a way with words. OMG 'More' is the one word that I have to leave you with! Hooray for Khira.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

This honestly makes me sick, the main character is so selfish , he is lucky enough to have a wife who supports him working full time by raising his daughters and having a spotless house waiting for him for him when he gets home from work as well as a six pack of beer. I hate the worlds values, and I realized how much the worlds values do not measure up to the kind of wonderful relationship I can have with my wife, while maintaining Christian values, you can read what you want to but no matter what religion you identify with, or if your agnostic, this is poison to your love life, love is not perfect,

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