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by Anonymous10/31/08

Nice

A sex sonnet in iambic pentameter (almost at least. You're last line had an extra syllable). You must have some literature studies in your background. I can only imagine your professor's expression if you turned something like this in!

It was clever and sexy. You created a nice flow with a natural beat that wasn't distracting or forced. Great job!

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by LeCavalier08/09/13

A blowjob sonnet! Yeah!

That was cool and written with respect to true versification. Thank you for this pleasure, Kimbelina :)

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