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Arrogantlly abusive behavior
Have no problem with water sports or pee play but your behavior and that of your friend is grossly abusive of others rights and feelings who are forced to clean up or cope with your mess. Isn't it time you grew up and confined your behavior to consenting adults with each other and not inflicted on others? Sorry that part of your behavior is irresponsibly abusive and stupidly inconsiderate--hardly erotic!
Great, but...
.. would have liked the story better if the two characters had gone to a hotel room (or somewhere indoors) where they could indulge in a right old proper piss-up. I've never found smelly alleys to be conducive to shagging, especially wet shagging (the best kind!). Be that as it may, a new story from leekeyone is always a treat and if this one is less hot than some of his previous ones, it just makes me thirsty for more. On to part 2!!
Incidentally, the previous poster is a prissy fuckin' idiot. What part of "This is a *fantasy*, moron!" doesn't he understand?
to Anonymous in USA
hey, anonymous, go stivy yourself. u don't like it, that's your problem. just because u don't like it, doesn't mean that others don't. how about u just leave this site and go play on disney channel, or sesame street, or even barney. just go away, u loser and numbnuts. great job, leekeyone. lucky stiff (pun intended).
Wonderfully Romantic!!
Wow, this was a great read and gave me some big bang material. I love the desciptive parts of specific emotional reactions to erotic play and banter. For some reason I pictured the bloke as looking like Roger Daltrey in his early sixties mod phase and the gal as a young version of Joan Collins (!) with long curly hair and was really able to get into it. Piss sex in an alleyway has to be one of the hottest things ever!
Fantastically Hot!
Great story, hot and sexy. I wish something like that would happen to me in real life.
Awesome
Would love to meet a girl like Tina :-) and see if we could take it one step further and both pee whilst i am inside her
deliciously messy!
loved it!
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