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by Anonymous08/12/07

Intellectual Facade

Your intellectual Facade crumbles with the spelling of "Sun" as "Son."

Otherwise, good stuff. Get an assistant to edit your work so you can appeal to the ones who would read your essays and poems.

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by LadyCassolette08/28/07

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Don't worry, concerned readers- my "intellectual facade" is still in tact. The son going down isn't referring to the sunset...

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