Am enjoying this story and it's buildup. In young love there will always be joy and disappointment so to keep the story believable, there must be some of both. It all depends on how many chapters you visualize writing to know how to keep the pace just right. Keep up the good work and I'll look forward to Chapter 3 soon.
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Anonymous08/12/07
wonderful!
This sounds like a wonderful story! I would like hear more cant wait for the next chapter! Thanks
I love how this story is going so far, I just hope that sophie sees that he is the one for her. Hopefully she'll see that before it's too late. Great story can't wait to read more. Thanks.
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Wonderful!
I love the build up between the two characters! Sophie needs to wake up and see what's right in front of her for the taking. Looking forward to more!
Building the story
Am enjoying this story and it's buildup. In young love there will always be joy and disappointment so to keep the story believable, there must be some of both. It all depends on how many chapters you visualize writing to know how to keep the pace just right. Keep up the good work and I'll look forward to Chapter 3 soon.
wonderful!
This sounds like a wonderful story! I would like hear more cant wait for the next chapter! Thanks
OK, I'm Lovin' it
I love how this story is going so far, I just hope that sophie sees that he is the one for her. Hopefully she'll see that before it's too late. Great story can't wait to read more. Thanks.
More!!!!
AGGG!!!! Clifhanger!!!!!!! Hurry up, what happens next?!?!
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