by bluefox07
I'm impressed -- a writer who uses spell check and proof-reads well or has a good editor!
You write well and the story tension hold our attention. Good fortune and thank you for your offering!
For the most part, a great story. Spelling / grammar errors here 'n' there, a'ye...but that's about it. Good luck on your series!
I enjoyed your story so much, it had everything, yet I long for more. I don't know if you have decided to continue this story because it is worthy of a few more chapters if not additional parts. You are very creative, going form mournful to vigilante in one single breath. Wow. Thank you so much for sharing. 💋
did you ever complete your final version of the story? I was very sad when I saw this was the only posted chapter of your rewrite as the quality of this version is much improved over the original and I'd love to read the rest.