All Comments on 'Nocturnus Eternal Ch. 01'

by bluefox07

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mBrowmBrowover 16 years ago
Great Start!

I'm impressed -- a writer who uses spell check and proof-reads well or has a good editor!

You write well and the story tension hold our attention. Good fortune and thank you for your offering!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Very impressive,

For the most part, a great story. Spelling / grammar errors here 'n' there, a'ye...but that's about it. Good luck on your series!

DarkLordCerberusDarkLordCerberusover 13 years ago
nice segways

look forward to more about renee!!!!!!!!!

kris10ekris10eabout 8 years ago
That was magnificently written....

I enjoyed your story so much, it had everything, yet I long for more. I don't know if you have decided to continue this story because it is worthy of a few more chapters if not additional parts. You are very creative, going form mournful to vigilante in one single breath. Wow. Thank you so much for sharing. 💋

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
I know this is a long shot but

did you ever complete your final version of the story? I was very sad when I saw this was the only posted chapter of your rewrite as the quality of this version is much improved over the original and I'd love to read the rest.

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