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Interesting Story, But...
...the writing left a lot to be desired. It felt like a play-by-play recounting, instead of a story.
Bilove it
You have a great story here. Hopefully you will continue it as a series of their stops on the trip.
You have a few problems with typos and/or grammar. The word : "their" refers to possession and the word "there" refers to a place.
more,more,more!!!!!
more please!!!!!
Ugly
A bad writer destroys interesting stories.
Loved it!
As per the previous reviewer, more, more, more.
Good plot
I liked the story ...
though it was bit fast paced and that you seems to be lest sensual than i expected but over all good story ...
looking for the sequence
I liked it
It was a fair story. I would love to have my wife do this with another couple. Imagine watching my wife with another man and a woman and sharing cum WOW.
WOW
loved your story, absolutely fantastic!
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