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This was one of the ones I read again and again.
There was just something that drew me to it.
Very good!
I like it very much. The five senses in fat and cursiv is a bit overdone (we want to unveil some ideas ourselves!), but except for that it's very good!
I like this very much
But like Tarakin, I think I would have liked it even more if the senses weren't highlighted/italicized. Nicely done.
I love
How you described the effect on the senses, a lot of passion and a lot of love, a well done poem.
So passionate.
I think this exemplified the idea of passion, perhaps more than any of the other poems in the competition.
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