By Your Side

Just beautiful....

Excellent. I look forward to reading more. Cheryl

Hey

My birthday is Feb 14 so please- it's enough that I hate all the force fed commercialism, but I have to endure a birthday as well. At least you can just ignore it and treat it as a normal day.

Scorching hotness!

Wow best college/lesbian story ever. It started with details and it wasn't rush, which I love. I then laughed for half an hour or so when 'D' force's her knee in Ryans balls. Lol best part, and its so detail it gives both point of view from both girls. Your my favortie author and this is the best story. You have great humour so add more humour if you can and make your story longer because Im not going wild long enough :) Every things really perfect.

Gotta give this one a 5

Hot! This story had all of the right elements, and nothing felt forced or contrived. The characters were realistic the pace perfect. I hope to see a lot more from this writer.

The right side.

Great story with just the right pace and buildup. I also hate Valentine's Day and love "The Notebook". Hope to read more.

Wonderful!!!

Its such a shame I could only give this story a 5 because it deserves 1,000. The build-up was just perfect. The characters were realistic and believable and your writing skills really show through.

I hope we see MANY more submissions from you.

This is a beautiful story, good job

This is a beautiful story, good job

I Guess I'm The Only One...

...who had trouble staying awake through the BORING build-up. I thought I was on the wrong site for the entire first part of this ho-hum story.

Very nice

I enjoyed the build up, now for chapter 2 and more of the love shared by these lovly ladies.

I liked it!

I really like your style of writing so read this story not because of the topic but because of the author. I loved the buildup and the sex was hot.

Love the romance!

The build-up and story was GREAT! The characters seem real and the romance was wonderful.

Fabuloso!

Why is it that the people who have the negative comments are too afraid to show themselves? I wish there was an option to NOT allow anonoymous comments and force people to leave at least an email address.Okay, on to my comments on the story.You know my feelings on this topic. However, over and above the girl sex, this was a truly wonderful story. Who better to fall in love with than the person who knows you best? It was a romantic story and while I'm not a fan of this category, it gets a 5 from me! Thanks for a great read (again), T!

Perfectly done

I never comment on stories, but this was just too good to not let the author know just how well this story was paced and done. It was believable, the sex was graphic but not "in your face", and it managed to actually tell a STORY...in two pages, no less!

great job

wonderfully written.

brilliant

Fantastic, one of the best stories I've read on this site. Moving and very erotic. Excellent.

loved it

not enough love stories between girls... this one is a fav.

Absolutely wonderful

I recently discovered that I'm in love with my best friend. This is the type of ending that I hope our story will have. Brilliantly written. Every now and then there are stories on this site that just make your day. This was one of them.

Thank you for writing and posting this. Please continue with more such stories.

Loved it.

Absolutely wonderful. I loved the romance and GREAT ending.
I usually don't comment on stories, but this was too good not to. Good job.

love it true^^

wow i loved that you didnt make the other girl an instant profressional it is very belilveable its a favorite i just hope that if i have it happen to me its as sweet....

Sweet

Sweet and romantic.

Awesome

Oh wow, this story made me cry.

wooowwww

that waz absolutly 100% beautiful. the best luv story ever. u deserve numerous awards. 2 make a long story short it was beautifuly done. =)

great

best i ever read

Loved it!

Beautiful

Beautiful story beautifully written

Amazing story. Kudos

Awesome story, until the End

I loved this story up until the end when it kind of cut of anticlimactically. The last paragraph killed it.

this is a awesome love story wish i could xperience that way too..more stories author..thanks

AWW

Oh my god that is such a sweet story.

Bit too matter of fact for me

I just found it too lacking in emotion. Sorry

Nice story, keep it up.

the end

you were doing good until the end. the i could tell but i wont thing was a let down.

Beautiful

Reminded me of my situation. My best friend also likes cream colored rose and Mr. Goodbar. But she is into guys and in a relationship. She won't ever feel the same towards me nor will I ever be able to tell her how I feel.

Meeeh

I don't really like when people say they are virgins just because they have not had sex with men *sighs* that killed it for me. It was also extremely short, barely having any real build up or indication that the feelings were indeed mutual. Onto better lesbians stories next hopefully

Great story

Awesome story. The character developments were good. I only wish there was more sex scenes. But even though it was one it well worth it :)