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GuiltyPleasureGuiltyPleasureover 16 years ago
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I really like this. It uses the expression "food for thought" brilliantly. Most of have had reflux from consuming the morning news at one time or another.. Good one MET.

Tess (clutching the Alka seltzer)

ghost_girlghost_girlover 16 years ago
nice work :)

I agree with Tess, this poem is well worth the time to read.

You have come a long way from when I first read you.

Only thing I would suggest, is there anything else you can do to your words that have " " or ' ' ?

I really enjoyed this one

:)

Bill DadaBill Dadaover 16 years ago
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Very nice Art. Yes the news can upset ones stomach. Loved

'...and coupons.'

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