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by Anonymous

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by Fallenfromgrace08/15/07

I love the simplicity of this one *rose*

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by jomar08/15/07

What FallenFromGrace said...

Sad, too.

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by Tarakin08/15/07

Awesome

Honestly I didn't think it was good when I first read it, but I thought over it again and again, it just wouldn't leave my mind. I think if poetry does that it's not only good, it's awesome.

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by damppanties08/17/07

:)

This poem leaves me with a smile, at a thought being expressed so simply and so beautifully.

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