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Anonymous08/17/07
Great lead in
What a wonderful build up to this story. I certainly hope you continue this story. But please don't make it typical. I am so tired of the authors who might as well be copying each other.
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Anonymous08/22/07
Not bad at all
Not bad. Not bad at all this looks like the makings of a real good story
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Anonymous11/12/07
like hot stories like this, turns me on to no end.
I love to give blowjobs, haven't been able to do one in along time. I'm overdue. keep wiriting stories like that, and I will have to do something about it, while I am in front of my computer.
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OMG
OMG - this is hot - More, More!
Erotic.
Erotic and hot without resorting to lurid obscens sex fantasies.I love your writing style,you are getting better and better.Readers of erotica if they have any sense soon learn authors they can trust to tell a good story.I have you on my favorite list.
Great lead in
What a wonderful build up to this story. I certainly hope you continue this story. But please don't make it typical. I am so tired of the authors who might as well be copying each other.
Not bad at all
Not bad. Not bad at all this looks like the makings of a real good story
like hot stories like this, turns me on to no end.
I love to give blowjobs, haven't been able to do one in along time. I'm overdue. keep wiriting stories like that, and I will have to do something about it, while I am in front of my computer.
Just Like Me
This is exactly what I want to do to my step dad. And more...
Great series
Great series!! Please tell me so hot voiced babe is gonna turn these into audio Gold soon!!
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