- All
Comments (4) - Add a
Comment - Send
Feedback Send private anonymous feedback to the author (click here to post a public comment instead).
| Literotica Toy Store ADULT TOY & DVD STORE FAST & DISCREET |
Literotica XXX Webcams 24/7 LIVE CAMS - FREE PREVIEW W/AUDIO! |
Literotica Adult Movies STREAMING ADULT MOVIES PAY PER MINUTE |
English
Difficult to decypher
for a simpleton like myself, but I read it again and again because it became so addictive. For me the line: "Following the lyrical breadcrumbs that lead to your inner self." Just displayed your very imaginative hidden talent. Very nice job, thanks for the read.
Believe me...
It coheres. And builds nicely to a crescendo. Makes me happy to find a poem like this one.
you done good kid.......
this piece of poetry does all that i think you intended it to. you portray the relationship between reader and writer with absolute artistic clarity. i had never thought of it in these terms before, but now, with this lyrical buffet s pread before me.....i can't believe i ever missed it. "follow the lyrical breadcrumcbs that lead to your inner self". that line is pure gold.
Nice!
I wouldn't call it allusions but rather very nice alliterations - the "riddles and rhymes" and "literary breadcrumbs" that lead to somewhere secret and and full of wonder.
Click here to leave your own comment on this submission! or
Back to Anonymous? or
More submissions by swallowedscream.