All Comments on 'The Cabin, the Snow and Natalie'

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dennyboy2dennyboy2over 16 years ago
Nice Story

Well written, very easy to visualize. Being older, "having" an 18 year old in a winter cabin.....

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
great story, more please!

Well written, I hope you can continue this one

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Cute Story

I liked this story although the dialogue between the 2 characters regarding both wanting to have sex with the other was a little cheesy but overall a hot story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
good start then vanished

started out great, well-developed characters &plot, but seems like you lost momentum just when you got to the good stuff - the sex was barely there.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Five-eight and 105 pounds? The girl would look like a concentration camp survivor. FFS, I am tired of men who don’t have a clue about women’s bodies.

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