All Comments on 'Awake in a Dreamland Ch. 01'

Would like to see more of this story.

The story was hot, but moved a bit too quick and could have used a bit more build up for some parts. Still, pretty darn good. Will be waiting for future chapters.

way to strange after he watched them together he would not hang around with them he would leave the house and stay away until bed time so wouldn't have to deal with her keep it realistic and stop trying to change human nature

loved this can't wait so see what happens

Liked it very much , but need more of this story !