All Comments on 'Good To Be Undead Ch. 02'

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SeniorcitizenSeniorcitizenover 16 years ago
Great story

Another great story. Well written and exciting. Keep writing. I love Vampire stories.

PhoenixPhoenixover 16 years ago
No this is what you should write about

These two stories are probably the best one you have here in this site. I wish you kept going with this series.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
naff

it's crap. it just feels poorly written, start to finish

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
More dialouge

I liked it, but you need more dialogue. You've done a good job of painting the pictures, but the characters need personalities and interaction and voices.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
More!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Please right more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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I am Samuelx. I am Black. I am Male. I was born in Cap-Haitien, Northern Haiti, and raised in Brockton, Massachusetts. I now live in Canada. I am the one and only Haitian Trickster, and quite simply live only by my own rules. I...

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