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Good To Be Undead Ch. 02

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by Anonymous

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by Seniorcitizen09/03/07

Great story

Another great story. Well written and exciting. Keep writing. I love Vampire stories.

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by Phoenix09/15/07

No this is what you should write about

These two stories are probably the best one you have here in this site. I wish you kept going with this series.

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by Anonymous11/24/08

naff

it's crap. it just feels poorly written, start to finish

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by Anonymous01/11/09

More dialouge

I liked it, but you need more dialogue. You've done a good job of painting the pictures, but the characters need personalities and interaction and voices.

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by Anonymous03/19/12

More!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Please right more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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