hmmm, more please great story can't wait to see where it leads
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Anonymous08/19/07
nice one!
great start you can't leave it there, please continue and don't make us wait too long!
by
Anonymous08/20/07
Applause Applause
As you can see, we like interracial without the stupid braindead cliches and sick crudeness.
More please - keep up the fine work.
With Regard
by
Anonymous08/20/07
Very Nice
Great pace, like the switch between male and female point of view, wonderfully written, great grammatics, and lovely seduction. Looking forward to the next chapter!
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Anonymous08/20/07
Great Beginning
Great beginning. I can't wait to read more. And thank God it's not one of those boring black guy with a huge willy or black woman whore stories. Those kinds of stories are so tired.
English
Nice build up
Please continue, the pace is good, the seduction better!
hot
hmmm, more please great story can't wait to see where it leads
nice one!
great start you can't leave it there, please continue and don't make us wait too long!
Applause Applause
As you can see, we like interracial without the stupid braindead cliches and sick crudeness.
More please - keep up the fine work.
With Regard
Very Nice
Great pace, like the switch between male and female point of view, wonderfully written, great grammatics, and lovely seduction. Looking forward to the next chapter!
Great Beginning
Great beginning. I can't wait to read more. And thank God it's not one of those boring black guy with a huge willy or black woman whore stories. Those kinds of stories are so tired.
Nice Introduction...
GREAT BEGINNING!
Incredible start !!!!!
Incredible start, its so suductive and hot as hell dont stop please
I love it!
Well written and riveting, I couldn't stop reading, can't wait for the rest
Mmmmmm?
Is this going to lead to some panty dropping action?
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