Addison: Mature Southern Belle Ch. 07

Editor needed

Good Lord, man, get yourself an editor. A good one. Someone who knows what the heck he or she is doing. Pull all your stories and have them (re)edited. And then post them in the correct category. People have been, in effect, telling you this for some time, now. Please act on it. Your stories show potential, but they have a ways to go. You've posted enough stories that you should be doing much better, by now