Man, you have hit on my two favorite fantasies--threesomes and Asian women--and rolled em into one sexy lil' package! can't wait to see that 2 for 1 special!
My only question is why didn't they go to his place instead of using a motel room? He seems to be unattached, no?
There are two answers to the "Why didn't they go to his place" question - one funny, one not.
A) The story was originally written at the request of my publisher - who needed it OVERNIGHT and only at 1500 words MAX. I had to write it in a hurry and eliminate as much superfluous detail as I could.
B) The "not funny" answer is that Raymond was totally unaware the first time out what was going to happen. After that, perhaps he preferred the motel for discretionary purposes or perhaps he only has a small apartment [ which you find out in the sequel he doesn't ... ]
Hope this answers your questions!
One of the best stories I have read in a very long time! Keep it up, would love to see what will happen to this man and his two women!
OH MY GOD!!!! This was such a great story. i absolutely love asian women. please make more chapters of this story. i would love to hear more about them. and in future chapters, have the girls wear stockings. that would be fantastic. nothing sexier than a hot asian woman in stockings.
This is a great story! A definate turn-on!
Now that you've introduced the Characters they deserve to be
followed - up and see exactly where it goes from here .
Do either stay with him or is it Short Term.
make a sequel
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