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Great
I loved it. I hope you'll continue this story.
Poetic, yet hot!
Your writing style is awesome! there have been so many times where I venture into the sci-fi genre and saw your story but never read it until today, and I'm glad I did! The style of the story was poetic and almost dreamy, but you threw in the right amount of passion to get a girl wet! Good job.
Ohhhh Merry Meet!
Nothing like a new spin to the stories passed down from one generation to the next and done with such eloquence! Keep the stories coming and you will have a devoted fan..ME!
Whoa.
AMAZING
A divine work
And No comedy intended. A sex fantasy dream for some that were sacrificed to ignorance. And some still are.
Well done!
Thanks for the great read.
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