by oohsexypenguin
i've been waiting for you to continue this story for a long time! and now he's leaving??? omg... i feel like crying... ;) love the story, keep writing! please...
I like the characters--it's like they're real people, with complex emotions. I feel like I am getting to know the characters like I would real acquaintances. What a great chapter. I can't wait 'till the next!
Elizabeth is shallow high maintance bitch. Gerard did NOTHING that justified such a vile extreme action --such as her striking him in face and SPITTING at him.
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does anyone know what the fuck she is crying over at the end of this chapter?
Love the tension between the two characters. A very hot sex scene. I can't wait to read more.
Love the tension between the two characters. A very hot sex scene. I can't wait to read more.
u simply cant stop this here. dey r so completely meant for each other. when r u writing next. n why have u written such less stories. exercise ur hands a bit. u simply have to put those wonderful ideas of urs in writing for us morons.
That was wonderful, please please finish it. I really like your style and that Elizabeth has such a temper. It really brings the story to life. Thank You
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Thank you for giving us an actual story and not just erotic sex scenes. Kudos to you. BUT you cut it off to soon.
u need to sincerely hurry up...and y does elizabeth have to be so difficult...its not his fault...
Please continue the story its killing me to know what happens next!! Please continue?
It would be nice to read the proper ending of this story - good or bad - just as long as you don't stop it at this chapter. Take your time and I hope you find the inspiration to continue writing ^-^
I just love the story, please don't end it like this. I can't wait to finish, one of the better stories I have read
my heart hurts. Please write a happy ending! Pretty please with sprinkles on top?
i love the story in fact i read it some time back and have just checked if it is continued but i have been very disappointed to find it in the same place. please finish it and if this is the conclusion inform the readers but it doesn't look like a conclusion to me.
Loved the story! Sorry you have chosen not to continue it. Really liked the characters and the interaction between them.