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Fun with Deepak Ch. 01

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous08/24/07

Awesome!

I love transit sex!

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by Anonymous08/25/07

Wonderful

i loved your story and please do write more such stories. It was simply beautiful

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by Anonymous08/27/07

Lovely start

This could be the beginning of a beautiful friendship !

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by SEANACHIE08/27/07

Good Start

I expect that you will continue to develop this story line in the future. I also expect that your skills will develop with practice. A good start. Good luck!

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by atul_ats11/30/07

Errrotic

This was really erotic... but one thing... initially it was difficult to identify if a girl or a boy was narrating the story... good work done... i expect a sequel from u...

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by air_fire01/06/08

Hot this was too hot

Hot build up. gets you so involved. continue

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by Anonymous05/15/08

armpit hair

Please describe her hairy armpits and how he loved them.

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by Anonymous03/21/09

Hairy armpits

Describe how wet, hairy your armpits were and their musky smell that excited Deepak.

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by Anonymous12/26/11

good one

story had really good tingle about it

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by Anonymous12/27/11

Confusing!

So it starts of with a woman having the hots for another woman, this Mrs.S and then she has a fling with a guy on the bus? Or does it start of with a guy having the hots for Mrs.S and then suddenly almost magically chnages his sex while on the bus to a girl????

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by Motorpenis12/27/11

Confusing but good

The beginning is confusing but yes the story is good. For a while i thought that it was about the gay adventures of a dude called Deepak.

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by bullus12/27/11

I also was unaware that it was from a woman's point of view as the story unfolded. But still, good start with the daring act in public.

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by Scotsman6901/03/12

The ambiguity at the start

is a fine way to begin. And it only gets better. Thank you.

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by Anonymous09/30/12

Nice

expecting more !!! Ultimate

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by redhue6009/02/13

Hot story

Waw, good story. write more.

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