All Comments on 'Again'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
i like this

i really enjoyed this story. I like the way it was short, as sometimes people take too much on, and the story loses its "flame" :P, but also i would like to have seen this story a bit longer, a bigger build up.

Overall nicely written, and hope to see more of u!

Kayla

kaylacakeskaylacakesover 16 years ago
i really like this

i really enjoyed this story. I like the way it was short, as sometimes people take too much on, and the story loses its "flame" :P, but also i would like to have seen this story a bit longer, a bigger build up. Overall nicely written, and hope to see more of u! Kayla

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kaylacakeskaylacakesover 16 years ago
nice:)

i really enjoyed this story. I like the way it was short, as sometimes people take too much on, and the story loses its "flame" :P, but also i would like to have seen this story a bit longer, a bigger build up. Overall nicely written, and hope to see more of u! Kayla

hathorbr1hathorbr1almost 12 years ago
Very Sweet!

I loved this story! Great Job!

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