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Goodbyes 1

byWillow Rain©
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by champagne198208/24/07

an emotive poem

Excellent use of metaphor through the burning and captive illustrations and your language use through the dove's yearning for freedom is really good. Thanks for sharing this. This poem has been mentioned in the Poetry Feedback and Discussion forum thread - New Poems Reviews.

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by champagne198208/25/07

I am sorry

I didn't complete a review today, but I did truly enjoy this poem. Please excuse my omission.

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