Genie Chronicles Ch. 28

Arggg... I want more.

Great series. You sure know how to keep people looking for the next one. Just don't take a month like the last one.

I need more!

I concur. what a way to keep a person wanting more!

Brilliant as always!

Joe, you have an extraordinary way of leaving a person hanging and wanting the next chapter. I've not been able to predict how things are going to go but I find the characters believable (suspending disbelief in appropriate quantities) and the story is fascinating, hot, and squishy.

You make me wish I had a Jennifer/Genie of my very own.

OMG

that is the best story i have evere read on this site!!!!! please continue to write more PLEASE!!!!

great as always

keep them coming and with an ending like that, I hope the next one is soon

Totally Great!!

Great story. Always looking for more chapters. Keep them coming.

Amazing as always

It's the best story on this site and imo we are all very happy you keep writing. Keep that up man!

loved it!!!

i dont know how u do it but you have managed to make one of the best series on this site and i hope you continue writing many more stories of jack's and jennifers' sexual adventures

What a series. What a chapter!

This series is on par with The Ancient Prophecy as the absoulte best I have ever read. It's become more than something I simply read for sexual enjoyment. I care about the characters, I anticipate what happens next, and overall am amazed that you are not a published writer. After the month mark between this chapter and the last I was beginning to fear you took another hiatus; glad to see my fears were unfounded. Keep up the phenomenal work!

P.S- I know this is presumptuous of me but I would like to request something: one of the strongest factors that made me fall in love with this series is the relationship between Jack and Jennifer. If you could devote a chapter to the growing romance between them I would be extremely appreciaticve. Maybe Jack could suprise Jen with something like a candlelit dinner where he whole-heartily thanks her for how much she's done for him and lets her know how much he truely cares. Like I said: its just a suggustion, I know I'll keep reading either way. thank you

Bum Bum Bum....

Haha, great story, and quite a "leave ya hanging" sort of ending.

Damn!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This whole story line is excellent keep up the good work please.

Excellent. 100% Grade A Material.

To be honest, I've heard/seen this story before, but I'd only read the first few chapters, and that was probably several months ago. Now that I've re-found this story, I've read every chapter in a scant couple of days, no thanks to life's little interruptions...

But I love every minute of it. Your ideas are top-notch, and I certainly enjoy the amount of loving naughtiness shared by Jack and Jennifer. I hope that sometime in the story, those two finally do get married, which'll make Jennifer so happy. Until then, I'm just gonna have to wait patiently for you to pump out another chapter...

More!MORe!More!

THis has been an absolutely fabulous series thus far. Please continue it, and, if possible create another one that is even better!!!! Please!!!!!!

More!MORe!More!

THis has been an absolutely fabulous series thus far. Please continue it, and, if possible create another one that is even better!!!! Please!!!!!!

Keep writing

What an excellent story you have here. If I had three wishes, one of them would be to get a sex slave genie like Jennifer. Damn. I hope you have more chapters coming. I can't wait to see what happens next.

The Next Chapter?

Mr. Brolly; I am a faithful fan that had long awaited your return to the world of writing. I know that one cannot rush genius or the writing spirit, but PLEASE! get the next chapter up! I know that I am probably overstepping my bounds, and I know that what I say may not carry much weight, but I also know that I am not the only one that feels this way. I implore you, please continue your story a little quicker. Or, put up updates on your profile that say something like "check back in a week to ten days," so that myself and others don't have to continue our cycles of hope and disappointment every day or so. Thanks for your consideration, and I hope I have not invoked your ire. The Wizard of Maz.

Still There??

You aren't gonna drop a cliff-hanger like that and then leave for a year again are you?!?! Please tell me no!!!

I love this series.

Please, please keep it going. I am really high strung and cliffhangers like this one do a number on my nervse so for my sake and those like me please post another chapter soon.

MORE Please the Wohle Thing Rocks So Far

WOWZA

I found the first if these 3 days ago, and have enjoyed reading every single one of them in my spare time :)

Cant wait for the naxt chapter, and what an ending!!

But please dont leaves us all hanging!

come on joe

please hurry up and finish writing the next chapter
i love this series and wish it continue for years but could you please hurry up and post the next chapter

please write more i hate cliffhangers

yea i agree

please hury up and write the next chapter as i am really lookig forward to finding out more about jennifer

awesome

that story left me wanting for and feeling quite satiated thank you

100%

next chapter?

any idea when the nextchapter is coming along?

WOW!

I really like this series! Keep up the good work :-)

Totally awesome

PLease continue!!!! Love this story, but can't believe it took this long for him to take her ass :)

Worried

Love the stories, just a little worried there is going to be another really-really long break between this one and the next...

maybe a blog or something, so we know your still alive at least...

awesome

100%, loved every word, but come on joe you cant leave us on a cliffhanger like that and leave for a year again

AHHHHHHHH!!!!!!! COME ON?

LOVE THE STORY, BUT WHERES THE END? I NEED, WANT, DEMAND, AND BEGING FOR MORE. PLEASEEEEEEEE?

Lovin' It!

Awesome story - fun, flirtatious, imaginative as hell!!

Can't wait to see what happens when Mom figures it out!

superb as always

I can't believe you've kept it going this long, but I ain't complaining. Keep it up, man, and don't just take off for a year like last time.

please continue writng

i usually dont read long stories but tis one got me craving for more ... very good work ... pls continue the story .

When Is The Next One?

You have got me hooked! I Love Jennifer!!! PLEASE Don't make me wait too long for the next one. I've read the entire story twice so far and get more out the story each time thru.

Totally great...

Ok... I have just read up until his chapter all in one day and I am still craving more. Most people don't understand the use of a good storyline but I can see you are fast becoming one of my favorite authors; and that is just with this one story. I hope you continue this soon as I am wondering what is going to happen.

PLEASE WRITE MORE

PLEASE please try to write more of this fabulous story :)This is certainly one of my favorite storylines on this site. I was very excited when I recently saw that you had added a few more chapters.... please please don't leave us hanging as long between your next installments. Truely great story here :)

More Please

This is a very well thought out story and is well written.

Best story I have ever read

Please continue the story as soon as possible, it has been quite a while since you wrote this chapter.

More Please

I really enjoy this story, it is well written and thought out. I truly hope you continue this story.

More Please

Please please please do some more of these stories. They are my favorite stories on this site and i desperatly wish to see more of them :)

COME ON!

Come one, Joe!!! Where are you!!!! It's been a year, keep it going or finish it, we are dieing out here man...

Please

Please continue this story, I truly would love to see this wonderful story completed.

Suspense much?

This is a briliant, well-written story. The whole plot and idea is fantastic, and masterfully executed. Jennifer seems like every guy's dream, and Jack is cool and relatible.

Don't leave us on a cliffhanger!

great story

Great story, loved every chapter, hope you find the time to continue it.

Start to Finish

Just read 1-28 back to back. Wonderful story! Hope you continue soon!

Love your work

I really love your work and was wondering when you would continue the series. Thank you for you amazing work!

Love this story

Please continue this story, I'm dying to see more.

Oh shit! is right.

It is now 11:42 in the morning. I have just spent the whole night and morning reading 29 damnable installations and like a junkie, want so much more. I reeeally want to see where you will take the story. Young virgins. Wildflower older sister. Precocious niece. Lusty aunt. Intuitive mother. Classic beach girl with white teeth and freckles I can almost smell the salt spray. And Jennifer. I have no words to describe how much I want her...and you, to continue.

Please?

Please Joe

More, I can't get enough of this story.