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A Harem Fantasy Ch. 01

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by Anonymous08/25/07

beautifully done

I loved your story. So well written, typo free, well thought out and romantic as well as strict in its nature!!!

I can hardly wait to see more form you.

Take care and I do hope to hear from you.

Lisa
kittenlis@yahoo.com

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by Anonymous08/25/07

Can't Wait for the Rest!

This showed real imagination. It is a genuine fantasy and the ritual taking was, in that setting, fairly believable.
The actual fucking could have been described more fully and without a feeling of being rushed after a long lead in--but it made me hot, anyway. I can't wait for the rest.

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by GAnnE08/30/07

A Royal Awakening?

Beautifully written with great character insights. It will be a great pleasure to read further chapters. Thank you!

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by GAnnE08/30/07

A Royal Awakening?

Beautifully written with great character insights. It will be a great pleasure to read further chapters. Thank you!

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