it is good to see you writing. I loved this piece, it took me right into the room with you both.
Untitled? I suppose we could summon up adjectives that could adequately title this submission. Words like bewitching, mesmerizing, or spellbinding? Perhaps magnificent, spectacular, or beautiful? Perhaps tantalizing, arousing, or delicious?
Anne - you are a beautiful person. Thanks for another wonderful short story. I hope that you write again soon.
Excellent. Really excellent.
it was ok until near the end you revealed that they were sisters and not brother and sister would have been better in the lesbian area not incest
Awsome, its really hard to write in 1st person I loved this story and its conclusion was EARTH SHATTERING! I write as Happyday in Literotica and I thought this was one of the best I've ever read.
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