I'm now very curious as to what will happen next, please continue this story.
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Anonymous08/26/07
ok beginning but waaay too short
I don't think this qualifies as being anywhere near a chapter. So short! That being said, you've gotten of to an interesting start...look forward to reading future (longer) chpts.
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10/30/07
Great so far
Intriguing story. Can't wait to read the next chapter.
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Anonymous03/26/08
Love it!
I read the whole story, and I adore it. Reminds me of me and my best friend long ago. I might email it to him, come to think of it.
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Intrigued
I want to know where this is going! Don't keep us waiting too long!
Interesting
I'm now very curious as to what will happen next, please continue this story.
ok beginning but waaay too short
I don't think this qualifies as being anywhere near a chapter. So short! That being said, you've gotten of to an interesting start...look forward to reading future (longer) chpts.
Great so far
Intriguing story. Can't wait to read the next chapter.
Love it!
I read the whole story, and I adore it. Reminds me of me and my best friend long ago. I might email it to him, come to think of it.
Intriguing
Loved this chapter. Can't wait to read more.
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