I thought the idea was decent. I just didnt think the execution was plausible.
If they saw each other day after day at the park the kid the guy pointed too might not be there every day at the same time. Arriving before the BBW mom came and leaving after she left.
"I think it's wrong to impose rigid racial roles on children this early," I said.
I have not laughed so much in a long time. Funny if not literally believable, and the sex was good too. Well done, a wry and amusing tone with a lot of clever language. Keep it up.- ReverendKilljoy
"Hell, take him for the week if you want. He's about to drive me-- Terrell, put the cordless drill down. No, it does not tickle the cat, it stops him from living. Don't make me come over there! Yeah, sure, no problem. You can have him as long as you want."
I will use this every time I need a pick-me-up... thank you... best EVER!
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just not believeable
I thought the idea was decent. I just didnt think the execution was plausible.
If they saw each other day after day at the park the kid the guy pointed too might not be there every day at the same time. Arriving before the BBW mom came and leaving after she left.
Sex with the kids at home seemed forced.
Anyway..decent idea
Satirical
"I think it's wrong to impose rigid racial roles on children this early," I said.
I have not laughed so much in a long time. Funny if not literally believable, and the sex was good too. Well done, a wry and amusing tone with a lot of clever language. Keep it up.- ReverendKilljoy
funniest line EVER on Literotica...
"Hell, take him for the week if you want. He's about to drive me-- Terrell, put the cordless drill down. No, it does not tickle the cat, it stops him from living. Don't make me come over there! Yeah, sure, no problem. You can have him as long as you want."
I will use this every time I need a pick-me-up... thank you... best EVER!
Please write another
Hey really liked it. Write another if you can
Thanks
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