Oh my god!!! - Jailhouse Rock was great and this is even better. For a budding author you definately know how to put the words together. Please please don't make me wait too long for the next part.
i cannot wait for chapter two! i can just imagine all the things aidan will do to eden once he gets her home!!
This is the first story of yours that I've read and I love it. I hate that you left us hanging but I can't wait to read chapter 2.
Fantastic! I can't wait to see where these two go from here!!
story.Looking forward to the next part.
I find the whole boss/secretary an interesting and desirable conflict. I thought this was well written and extremely on point. Good job.
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Wow - It just get better and better
Oh my god!!! - Jailhouse Rock was great and this is even better. For a budding author you definately know how to put the words together. Please please don't make me wait too long for the next part.
chapter two please!
i cannot wait for chapter two! i can just imagine all the things aidan will do to eden once he gets her home!!
Loved it
This is the first story of yours that I've read and I love it. I hate that you left us hanging but I can't wait to read chapter 2.
So HOT!
Fantastic! I can't wait to see where these two go from here!!
Brilliant
story.Looking forward to the next part.
Excellent
I find the whole boss/secretary an interesting and desirable conflict. I thought this was well written and extremely on point. Good job.
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