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by FarangPrince08/31/07

Lovely Story

Kudos. Just a very sweet, well written story. The dialog could have been a little stronger, but the storyline was excellent. For other writers, here is a perfect example of a story that can be sweet as well as sexy.

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by Anonymous11/09/07

Enjoyable

I am not a writer so i cannot critic your grammar,etc. I just know what I like and this story I liked. To me it flowed well. Only one question was not answered for me. How cute was the new maid.

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by Anonymous07/20/09

great

`could have used longer detail,about time togather,how you and her got back to the states' loved the story give us more

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