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by Anonymous

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by LeBroz10/04/07

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Very fine piece. The only problem {IMO} is the washed-out look of the type which makes it hard to read. Perhaps needs a darker brown.

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by ghost_girl10/05/07

I agree

the subject and content are spot on, but I had trouble seeing the pale brown. It all seemed to blend together. Otherwise, good job :)

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by tazz31701/10/12

THE VISION IS JUST

when looking both ways and backward. TK U MLJ LV NV

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