All Comments on 'Lucky's Lucky Night Ch. 03'

God I love this story line! It reminds me of my lover and myself. This is soooooo sexy. Keep up the great work!!!

breathless from just reading it, holy hell great story more please!!Makes me think of my guy and I wow wonderful

Are you trying to kill me? HOT fricken story, cant wait for more.

very well done!

I'm hooked! Totally hooked, and I feel like there is something up with Cole. The whole "alpha" male. Greatt story!

I'm plagiarizing so bad but who cares? This storyline is incredible and your characters are amazing! I mean, straight up and down great. Do you think you can give me some tips on how to approach a genre like this?

I enjoyed reading this series. I hope that you are going to add more. I want to know what happens between these two. I hope they can work it all out and stay together, I think they'd be good for each other.

As a BF married to a WM, I absolutely love these stories, and this is the best by FAR!!!!! I love when he says, "When I fell asleep, you were in my arms. When I woke up you weren't there. I don't think I like that." SOOOO HOTTTT!!!

Thank you for the wonderful description of their ecstasy.

More, please!

Your words literally stole my breath away and shook me to my core. I'm sad there's no more - but you're a wonderful writer.

Wow, wow, and WOOWW! Your description is very imaginative!

I absolutely loved this story! Your vivid details really sparked my mental imagery. Sweet, touching, hot, sexy. Very, very good story.

Please add more to the story. It's amazing! Awesome fucking job!

Really, this story was well done.

this story was awesome. is there more?

That girl was more than lucky...she was blessed!!!

Blessed with a thoughtful caring friend who connected

her with someone who could appreciate her and is a superlative lover.

He is a lusty alpha male..yummy.

Thank you so very much.

I love the story and I hope that you continue it!

I want more! This story has potential to be one of the good ones! There is nothing like the give and take of 2 Alpha's and you need to explore and develope these two characters. DON'T STOP NOW! I WANT MORE! (See that's my alpha speaking!)KittyOh48

this is of course a great story, please continue it. love a dominant male and a woman that knows when to hand over control... love a possessive guy.

MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This story is so awesome. please continue it.

Loved it. Excellent writing. I'd love to see the story continue.

I want more so damn good:)

I read this story over and over. it's so good. I especially love that last position with his hand cupping her throat, tapping it from the back! haha

Awesome read thanks for sharing these chapters....any chance you'd have more time to get Lucky and Cole to take things further? ?? What's next?