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Lucky's Lucky Night Ch. 03

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous08/31/07

Love It!!!!!!

God I love this story line! It reminds me of my lover and myself. This is soooooo sexy. Keep up the great work!!!

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by hisangelbeauty08/31/07

wow

breathless from just reading it, holy hell great story more please!!Makes me think of my guy and I wow wonderful

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by Anonymous09/01/07

Good God Woman!!

Are you trying to kill me? HOT fricken story, cant wait for more.

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by Anonymous09/01/07

HOT

very well done!

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by SecretFantasy6909/05/07

Next installment...Hurry!

I'm hooked! Totally hooked, and I feel like there is something up with Cole. The whole "alpha" male. Greatt story!

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Fan-fucking-tastic!!!

I'm plagiarizing so bad but who cares? This storyline is incredible and your characters are amazing! I mean, straight up and down great. Do you think you can give me some tips on how to approach a genre like this?

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by hotbuns8712/21/07

More?

I enjoyed reading this series. I hope that you are going to add more. I want to know what happens between these two. I hope they can work it all out and stay together, I think they'd be good for each other.

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by Anonymous02/18/08

Thanks for a rockin' orgasm

As a BF married to a WM, I absolutely love these stories, and this is the best by FAR!!!!! I love when he says, "When I fell asleep, you were in my arms. When I woke up you weren't there. I don't think I like that." SOOOO HOTTTT!!!

Thank you for the wonderful description of their ecstasy.

More, please!

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by Anonymous02/27/08

Wow Pt II

Your words literally stole my breath away and shook me to my core. I'm sad there's no more - but you're a wonderful writer.

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by Anonymous10/15/08

Intense and passionate!

Wow, wow, and WOOWW! Your description is very imaginative!

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by Anonymous04/04/09

oooh YES!

I absolutely loved this story! Your vivid details really sparked my mental imagery. Sweet, touching, hot, sexy. Very, very good story.

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by mspoetic10/23/09

More!!!!!!!!

Please add more to the story. It's amazing! Awesome fucking job!

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by shereads3801/12/11

Great Story

Really, this story was well done.

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by Anonymous08/24/11

AMAZING!

this story was awesome. is there more?

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by Alpha_Marm10/26/11

Sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet, so delicious

That girl was more than lucky...she was blessed!!!
Blessed with a thoughtful caring friend who connected
her with someone who could appreciate her and is a superlative lover.
He is a lusty alpha male..yummy.
Thank you so very much.

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by Alexandra14504/17/12

Love It!

I love the story and I hope that you continue it!

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by Anonymous11/30/12

Don't Stop Now!

I want more! This story has potential to be one of the good ones! There is nothing like the give and take of 2 Alpha's and you need to explore and develope these two characters. DON'T STOP NOW! I WANT MORE! (See that's my alpha speaking!)KittyOh48

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by black_maestra12/20/12

love this 1

this is of course a great story, please continue it. love a dominant male and a woman that knows when to hand over control... love a possessive guy.

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by oneboobee02/05/13

MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This story is so awesome. please continue it.

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by Anonymous05/13/14

Loved it. Excellent writing. I'd love to see the story continue.

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by chocolatesista05/14/14

more

I want more so damn good:)

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by MyaHunter07/09/14

sooo good

I read this story over and over. it's so good. I especially love that last position with his hand cupping her throat, tapping it from the back! haha

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by Anonymous02/04/16

I need a lucky ki d of night/morning

Awesome read thanks for sharing these chapters....any chance you'd have more time to get Lucky and Cole to take things further? ?? What's next?

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