All Comments on 'Peeping Tom'

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AzuldrgonAzuldrgonover 16 years ago
Good, but way too short.

There was almost no setup except that Tom looked through a hole and there she was. Good for those who want something short, sweet and to the point. Almost way too short, but it will appeal to some.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Good Job! Nice Hot fantasy!!

I enjoyed this! But please hurry with more?

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