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Eden Ch. 02

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by Anonymous

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by Invisible2u08/31/07

Great!!

I love these two. I love also how you're teasing us a bit at a time. Makes the anticipation for the next chapter so much more intense!! Please more soon!!

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by Mistress_Joli09/03/07

Continues to be good

I like how you switched the POV to Aidan and gave the history of him buying the lingerie. Excellent build up to the time at his apartment. Oh I would love to be Eden.

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