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Eden Ch. 03

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by Anonymous08/31/07

Awwwww

If this is the end, it was short but very sweet. Nicely done! I loved it.

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by Anonymous09/01/07

Don't stop!

Great job! I hope that this part 3 osn't the end. If it's possible, please continue the story. Would love to read more about their relationship.

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by Mistress_Joli09/03/07

More if you can

I totally agree, I would love to read more about this couple. The interaction between them is perfect. But, if it is the end for now, so good. You have a knack for good writing. Thank you for the good story.

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