All Comments on 'Obsession'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Oh this is so creepy

I don't know what to rate it. 100 would be fair because the writing style is excellent. You bring the reader into the mind of the narrator, and you do it so well my skin is crawling. From the first opening lines, when he reveals he is twice her age, you know this probably won't end happily.<br><br>

This is a very realistic scenario. I lived through it. I don't know which way the author is going with the tale, but I do remember the horror I felt at trying to move on from someone who didn't want to let go. You go from wanting to be nice and not hurt them, to feeling stifled, to strong dislike and eventually you want to bash them with a shovel.<br><br>

I'm going to try to keep reading this story, but I might have to peek through my fingers!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Hmmm...

A fantastic story but I agree it's getting a little weird and creepy.

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