All Comments on 'You'll See, Lucy'

That was fucking awesome. A little long to get to the action but it was well worth it.

Loved your story, next part please

What is it about NZ ---- makes me want to go see for myself

Definitely nrrds more and more!

You made a big mistake...really big!!! Chicago is the "Windy City" not BOSTON!!! hehheh....Loved this story...Great wonderful...and You made me "See" the country too as you talked about the different names....

Thank you very much...Ralph

This story was amazing! I could see and hear the action and it was fantasically arousing. Normally not a fan of anal, but the way the author described the sisters actions and reactions made me unable to stop reading. Looking forward to more.

This is an awesome story. Held my attention from start to finish, and left me wanting more. Good job, please keep up the good work!

WOW, THIS MUST BE THE DREAM OF EVERY MAN ON EARTH TO BE ABLE TO EXPERIENCE THIS WONDER OF PASSION AND PLEASURE.

Very impressively written with arousal's well scribed - hot as in very!<P>

Plus a strong plausible read. Thanks Author. <P>

With High Regard

You did a wonderful job, Keep up the good work

Excellent writing. Loved the story line, descriptions and sex. Makes me want to visit NZ!

Well written, great imagery and ending. When's part 2?

I don't usually like submissions this long but you had me hooked the whole time - a perfect balance of storyline and nasty sex. Thanks for submitting

That was JoeDreamer quality, this should be on the Top List!

Great read!

My Goodness.... This was the most amazing story and I was hooked from beginning to the end. Highly arousing...

Great story, well written and best of all smokin HOT sex! We BOTH loved it! Keep it UP! ;-)

That truly was an amazing story. Gotta love sisters. I don't think there would be any way I could survive blowjobs from both as well as fucking both of their asses without coming. That truly would be an amazing experience.

Fasinating travelog leading up to exciting trio action. Begs for a follow up story.

Enjoyed it very much. Different setting and well written. Will a follow up include the missing husband?

that was amazing

only one question. If the water is so toxic, then how come was it okay to have oral sex while still wet with the toxic water?

One of the best stories I've ever read. It's well thought out and you were able to completely captivate my attention right up to the end. Thank you and well done.

Very hot. Well set up and a nice pace. You are a very good writer.

I can't seem to make my brain come up with articulate words. Oh, I see, all the blood has gone to my other brain. That was some of the most erotic scenes I have ever read. Good job. You know how to really get the mind, and other parts, working. That takes real talent. Or, you have really lived this, and are just reminiscing. Ha. Thanks

Rather long buildup. Butthe subject area was of interest. I liked the hidden little fantasys. Then when we got to the fucking, I wondered how Becca was going to give in, & how lucy was going to bring it up. Well written. I liked it a lot.

A fantastic story. Excellent writing. I would only of had him totally lick, sniff, suck and eat their dirty bumholes before and after sodomizing them along with a description of the scent and taste.

Please continue this adventure! Loved it!

Please continue this story! There's so much potential there!

I was hard as a rock once the storyline got to the hot springs. Nobody wears any clothes in a hot springs, thanks for a very good read.

Incredible sex scenes! Very detailed and overflowing with feeling/emotion and passion. I love the intense physical and emotional intimacy. Thanks for sharing!