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Futility and Frustration

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by foehn208/31/07

Empathy yet lives...

A very nice empathetic poem. (Of course, I tend to think we learn empathy by having lived through things.) Good lines in here ... "unable to see ... through blackened eyes..." and "like a roped and snorting bull." The hyperbole of the last stanza gives punch to what the poet is feeling. Well done.

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