Dang, we don't have storms like that up here!! I love your work and look forward to many more stories like this. Very imaginative and not just sex, tho the sex is hot and welcome.
Girl, this is wicked. I loved it!! wish green would visit me, lol
I love your style of story telling, very matter of fact and easy to read, plus you kept me interested throughtout the entire tale. well done Magica, enjoyed very much
Is there another chapter to this story, that was good. What happens when he's not in heat? Thanks for this story.
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Anonymous09/10/07
Another Original Sensual SHORT STORY by Magica
The first half of the story before any sexual gesture,proves Magica is a writer,erotic or non erotic .
Actually the whole story without any change can be published as common stream literature .
very convincing . Magica ,as far as I read her stories(nearly 5 till now),knows very well how to handle "commonly unbelievable themes", incest is in its (sweetest) minimum,non human is to a great extent humanized,domination is treated sooo lovingly and kink is sweetly treated . wonderful writing .....
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09/10/07
Loved it!
Great story, very hot sex scene. I really enjoyed how at the end you are left with questions but instead of being confused it just makes the character development that much better.
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Anonymous12/12/07
Loved it!
You gotta write another chapter! It was awesome!
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Anonymous02/28/08
Lovely Story...
It's quite a good story, however there are two complaints I have. (1) it's way way too short and (2) the ending was a little abrupt like what species is Green? It peaks your curiosity though. Great build-up.
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Anonymous05/07/08
MORE PLEASE!!
I love how you tell the story and let the reader get into Maggie's life. Very descriptive and funny. Hot and sensual. I agree with some other readers and believe it's way too short!!!! We want more!!!
I found it kind of funny that a farm chick gets laid and the guy sticks around. This was good, short, but good. There should be an expansion or sequel to this story.
Not your typical, fear-mongering close encounter you always hear about or watch. No, this one was tasty and much more close to the real deal ;) I love the idea of his being in season, corresponding with the fever: which in turn overtook her, at the same time. Nice!
English
short and sweet!
I rather like this little gem of a story. It captures what women fantasize about. Do write some more :)
whoa!
I hope this was Part 1 and there will be more chapters! Seriously hot!
YOU NEVER KNOW
To all you lonely women,you never know what is lurking in the COSMOS,this is a real winner.Please go on with a sequel.
MMMmm Yes!!!
Dang, we don't have storms like that up here!! I love your work and look forward to many more stories like this. Very imaginative and not just sex, tho the sex is hot and welcome.
hot damn!
Girl, this is wicked. I loved it!! wish green would visit me, lol
I love your style of story telling, very matter of fact and easy to read, plus you kept me interested throughtout the entire tale. well done Magica, enjoyed very much
julie
HOTTTTT!!!!
Is there another chapter to this story, that was good. What happens when he's not in heat? Thanks for this story.
Another Original Sensual SHORT STORY by Magica
The first half of the story before any sexual gesture,proves Magica is a writer,erotic or non erotic .
Actually the whole story without any change can be published as common stream literature .
very convincing . Magica ,as far as I read her stories(nearly 5 till now),knows very well how to handle "commonly unbelievable themes", incest is in its (sweetest) minimum,non human is to a great extent humanized,domination is treated sooo lovingly and kink is sweetly treated . wonderful writing .....
Loved it!
Great story, very hot sex scene. I really enjoyed how at the end you are left with questions but instead of being confused it just makes the character development that much better.
Loved it!
You gotta write another chapter! It was awesome!
Lovely Story...
It's quite a good story, however there are two complaints I have. (1) it's way way too short and (2) the ending was a little abrupt like what species is Green? It peaks your curiosity though. Great build-up.
MORE PLEASE!!
I love how you tell the story and let the reader get into Maggie's life. Very descriptive and funny. Hot and sensual. I agree with some other readers and believe it's way too short!!!! We want more!!!
Nice!
I found it kind of funny that a farm chick gets laid and the guy sticks around. This was good, short, but good. There should be an expansion or sequel to this story.
Green and dreamy.
Not your typical, fear-mongering close encounter you always hear about or watch. No, this one was tasty and much more close to the real deal ;) I love the idea of his being in season, corresponding with the fever: which in turn overtook her, at the same time. Nice!
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