All Comments on 'Desiree's Star Ch. 08'

and that's it? the chptr was waaaay too short for all of that time

I loved it. It was a great start, again ^^

Keep up the good work! I was secretly hoping you would finish the story. ^^

Seriously, I don't think you could have possibly written a more annoying and childish story, I give up, I was hoping it's get better, but it just doesn't.