It's unusual to see a story told as if the writer is speaking directly to the reader, but this worked pretty well. One typo, though. I'm pretty sure you meant "nether regions" and not "neither regions."
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Anonymous09/05/07
Learn the English language
If you can't tell the difference between "were" and "where", you have no business touching a keyboard.
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Anonymous03/23/09
Beautiful
Good story, love your story line. She can squeeze my dick any time. This is Literotica not English 101, write like you enjoy it. There are some people who just hurt themselves while reading other peoples stories. Good luck.
English
Not a bad start
It's unusual to see a story told as if the writer is speaking directly to the reader, but this worked pretty well. One typo, though. I'm pretty sure you meant "nether regions" and not "neither regions."
Learn the English language
If you can't tell the difference between "were" and "where", you have no business touching a keyboard.
Beautiful
Good story, love your story line. She can squeeze my dick any time. This is Literotica not English 101, write like you enjoy it. There are some people who just hurt themselves while reading other peoples stories. Good luck.
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