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Vampire Not So Cold

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous09/04/07

WELL???

I LIKED UR STORY BUT--A LITTLE CONFUSING AT THE END..U SHOULD HAVE SAID A LITTLE MORE,,GOOD SEX SCENE BUT NO BITE R ANYTHING TO LET THE VAMPIRE CHARACTER SEEM REAL R WAS ORAL SEX THE REQUIRED NOURISHMENT INSTEAD OF BLOOD..ANYWAY U COULD DO WITH A PART 2..I THINK OTHERS AND I WOULD ENJOY HEARING MORE ABOUT THIS STORY..THANKS

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by Anonymous03/02/08

wow

Some big typos that kind of take away from the flow of the story. Other than that, it was pretty good. I definetly enjoyed it. Sweet ending, too.

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by Anonymous04/28/08

nice

i loved it

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by aryelofthenight02/23/09

wanted more

Very interesting story. Could have gone on a little longer for me gave more plot.

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