The Unconquerable Man

You sure like yourself

1. Why bother to stress the fact that you're black? Doesn't strike me as being important.


2. So you're the perfect sociopath hunter: one para would have put the reader in the loop. No need to batter us to death with it.


3. Enough of the self congratulation: on with the story. The idea's fine, and it's time to take it somewhere.

Great lead-in

But you forgot to attach a story. I don't always like your choice of subject matter, but no one can seriously deny your talent. It looked like you were going to give us a fantastic story here, but you stopped at the preface. Please reconsider and write a story to go with it.

I love your work. thanks for the memories. PS : Some women do love ur anal sex stories. after all, we're the buyers of erotica the same way men buy porn.