All Comments on 'A Private Pool Party'

by Hipnotic

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don87654don87654over 16 years ago
Could have been much more erotic.....

The author needs to write more with more sexual experience. There is not quite anything more erotic than skinny-dipping in a private pool, followed by one-on-one sex. A bare cock in a little used pussy makes the act even more cock-throbbing. In these fantasy stories, there is little chances of pregnancy in their reality. I have a bit of a problem with them when birth control is used.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Consent

I absolutely love the way consent was covered in this. Thank you.

Sexy. Excellent balance of investment in story and arousal. I really enjoyed it.

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